First, I have to look up, "perspicuity"...If you genuinely find certain passages of the tutorial lacking in perspicuity
"clearness or lucidity, as of a statement."
Even your offer to examine anything lacking perspicuity requires fairly intelligent people to use a dictionary.
It is my opinion that any writing which requires a dictionary, three or four times per paragraph, lacks perspicuity.
I would say you are writing a tutorial for nerds, not a literary tour de force, but that would be false.
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