The only possible problem I see is that the 1k resistor color code seems wrong.Hi sorry for my delay away at work. I connect the 24v PSU the bulb lights strait away but very dimly. Please let me know ware you want me to take the reading. I will take pic of my completed board and post.
Sorry for my constant editing on this forum still working out the size for the pics.
Are you sure your magnet strength is at least 55G?
This may sound like a stupid question, but have you measured your supply voltage with the circuit connected?
Measure the voltage from pin 3 on the 3245 to GND when the magnet is removed, and when it is applied. The voltage should change from ~24V to ~0V. If this works, measure the voltage from the gate of the MOSFET to GND under the same conditions. It should change from 24V to ~14V.