I’ve attached a dummy version of my updated resume to gather expert opinions before finalizing it. I’m looking to improve it further and would greatly appreciate your help, especially on the formatting, content quality, and overall layout.

Your feedback would help me ensure the resume is aligned with current industry expectations for embedded systems roles and presents my profile effectively.

Thank you in advance for taking the time to review it

 

hi a5745,

IMHO, You should have the confidence to write and submit your own CV to a prospective employer.

Post what do you consider unsatisfactory or lacking in your PDF posted CV.?

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I’ve prepared what I believe is the best version of my CV so far. However, I would still really appreciate your expert feedback to ensure it meets industry expectations—especially in terms of factory or industrial-related content.

Specifically, I’d love your thoughts on:

Whether the formatting and layout look professional and clear.

If the project details are enough to convey my skills and experience.


Any suggestions to improve it further