I don't know; there is not enough information.Sorry, first things first then. Will my schematic work? I've run the simulator on multisim and it says it should.
In terms of building how do I make the wires look neater
First you need to translate your functional schematic from the simulator in one that is annotated with reference designators for each component including the ICs. Each symbol that has wires going into and out needs pin numbers on those wires. Some people can construct a working circuit from that but others might need to make wire list of all the connections so they can check them off one at a time. Everybody has to find their comfort zone.

