ok i think i got it here's a picture of my workThanks for showing at least some work. But you have made a huge step going from your original circuit to you second circuit. What you ask someone to review your work (especially strangers who you aren't paying) you want to make it so that they can follow your work from step to step and verify that what you have done is valid without having to pull out a scratch pad and work the problem for themselves from scracth. BTW, if you take this approach with what you turn in, you will almost certainly see a significant improvement in the grades you get back -- it's part of the proper care and feeding of homework graders.
Now, consider your simplified circuit. You have a dependent source that is controlled by the current ix, but you don't give any indication of which current is ix. That should set off warning flags right there.
What efforts have you made to check your answer? One of the nice things about most engineering disciplines is that you can verify the validity of an answer by taking the answer as a given and showing that it is consistent with the original problem.
Neither answer is correct, but the other answer is (in some regards) very close.