Grammer correction in Chapter 1.4

Discussion in 'Feedback and Suggestions' started by drteeth, Jun 25, 2005.

  1. drteeth

    Thread Starter New Member

    Jun 25, 2005
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    First of all, thanks so much for these books. I have gained an interest in learning about electricity/electronics and feel these books will help me tremendously.

    That being the case, I'd love to help out in any way I can while reading through these books.

    The first correction I see is on page 16 in Chapter 1.4. The paragraph begins with "When the electrons are poised in that static condition...". There is a sentence in that paragraph that reads, "If this charge (static electricity) is stationary, and you won’t realize
    that energy is being stored at all." That obviously is a typo at some point. My suggestion would be to remove the "If" at the beginning, but you could also remove the "and", though I believe the first option would retain the meaning it was meant to have.

    Thanks again!
    -g
     
  2. Dcrunkilton

    E-book Co-ordinator

    Jul 31, 2004
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    Thanks for the correction. I have enered it.
     
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