Collected corrections

Discussion in 'Feedback and Suggestions' started by drteeth, Jun 25, 2005.

  1. drteeth

    Thread Starter New Member

    Jun 25, 2005
    9
    0
    I decided to create one topic and just post multiple corrections that are needed to the text here. If that is not OK, please let me know. Otherwise, let's get started. =)

    Chapter 2.2: First paragraph, first sentence reads, "Ohm’s Law also make intuitive sense if you apply if to the water-and-pipe analogy." Should read, "Ohm's Law also MAKES intuitive sense if you apply IT to the water-and-pipe analogy." Simple typos.

    -g
     
  2. drteeth

    Thread Starter New Member

    Jun 25, 2005
    9
    0
    Chapter 2.6: First sentence in paragraph reads: "Ohm’s Law is not very useful for analyzing the behavior of components like these where resistance is varies with voltage and current." The "is" does not belong.

    -g
     
  3. drteeth

    Thread Starter New Member

    Jun 25, 2005
    9
    0
    Chapter 3.2: Sentence reads, "This is why ”defibrillating” equipment used by emergency medics works: the jolt of current supplied by the defibrillator unit is DC, which halts fibrillation and and gives the heart a chance to recover." One too many "and"s in there.

    -g
     
  4. drteeth

    Thread Starter New Member

    Jun 25, 2005
    9
    0
    Chapter 3.5: Sentence reads, "To be safest, you should follow this procedure is checking, using, and then checking your meter...." I assume that the "is" above should be "of".

    -g
     
  5. Dcrunkilton

    E-book Co-ordinator

    Jul 31, 2004
    416
    11
    drteeth

    Thanks for all the corrections. I've got them entered.

    Yes, It helps to have them in one topic.
     
  6. line

    New Member

    Jun 9, 2005
    2
    0
  7. Dcrunkilton

    E-book Co-ordinator

    Jul 31, 2004
    416
    11

    I have changed to vice versa throughout all the volumes except for volume 5, which did not have any visa-versa. The changes are up at http://www.ibiblio.org/kuphaldt/electricCircuits/. Hopefully comming to allaboutcircuits.com soon. Thankyou, for the help in getting the errors out.
     
Loading...